chucho28's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Journey of Wheel]

cool

this work doesn't show a good story or even something very creative
i think this work is to show people that you can make great animations
and i think so.
for your next works a good story and your great skill of animation will lead
you right to the front page.
good work! : D

paragsid responds:

Man... thanx..i m blown

[Biology vs. Chemistry]

excelent work

just maybe you should put a play and pause button
and an intro could improve it a lot
but in general very good and creative work
keep the good work!

Blakant responds:

Well, the Intro is the crew's.
So I dont wanna bug that for how...
and the play & pause is kinda hard, most of the sound r events, so everything will ruin if the viewer can pause em, right?

[Akuma v Twelve]

very very good

nice work
but maybe you should make it more longer
you know to see more fighting
maybe you should make an intro to make it even better
nice sound and animation
in general awesome
keep the good work!
9/10

Slicing-Claws responds:

thanks!

[Happy Birthday Uncle Dan]

Needs improvement

it seems like you made it in five minutes
so work harder in your works
it was entretaining but very very short,
i like the song it was kind of fun
there wasn't much drawing but still i think it's acceptable
the next works you make put more efforts on them
keep it up
8/10
3/5

Maxaroni5 responds:

i don't make flash anymore. I only do it for special occasions. If you want to see a good flash i did go in my other submissions and pick TA 3.5 ...

also, you think you're so good at flash? where are your submissions?

and it took me about 6 hours. if i did it in 5 minutes it would look bad. if you did flash you'd realize what a long process it is you poser.

[The Drunken Spartan]

no good

sorry no everyone can like it
you should improve scenes
it was the same over and over

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

I lol'd.

[Frankensteins Robot]

cool but...

very good graphics
the intro was awesome
very good and structured story but
very simple, you could make a longer story with
this animation
in general very good

adamskii responds:

thanks, i would have love to have made this longer but seeing as it was coursework and the brief called for a 2 minute animation i could be marked down for making it longer you see :<

[Zelda: Links misfortune]

work harder

the story was very slow and the drawing was very square
but even with that the animation was interesting, the sounds that link does were ok, in general i think your work is good but you need to improve it:
1.- in drawing
2.- presentation
keep it up!! XD
8/10

PlatformSource responds:

Im trying to improve my paint brush skills, i used to work with sprites but i got bored of them.im mostly about the zelda and halo now. mario is done with for me, but i will improve :)

[You Don't Love ME Anymore]

Good job

It seems you can do very good movies,
nice song, the only thing is that the animation runs a little slow in terms that
when it beggins there's no much movement just recomend you to make it
a little more fluid.
but very good work
keep it up XD
9/10

OrangePylon responds:

Yeah, I'll give you that on the begining, but I try to keep my submissions T-rated at most, so I couldn't exactly show Birdo "making it with the whole hockey team". ;) I mean my grandma's gonna see this. :P

But thanks alot for the great review.