chucho28's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Journey of Wheel]

cool

this work doesn't show a good story or even something very creative
i think this work is to show people that you can make great animations
and i think so.
for your next works a good story and your great skill of animation will lead
you right to the front page.
good work! : D

paragsid responds:

Man... thanx..i m blown

[Happy Birthday Uncle Dan]

Needs improvement

it seems like you made it in five minutes
so work harder in your works
it was entretaining but very very short,
i like the song it was kind of fun
there wasn't much drawing but still i think it's acceptable
the next works you make put more efforts on them
keep it up
8/10
3/5

Maxaroni5 responds:

i don't make flash anymore. I only do it for special occasions. If you want to see a good flash i did go in my other submissions and pick TA 3.5 ...

also, you think you're so good at flash? where are your submissions?

and it took me about 6 hours. if i did it in 5 minutes it would look bad. if you did flash you'd realize what a long process it is you poser.

[The Drunken Spartan]

no good

sorry no everyone can like it
you should improve scenes
it was the same over and over

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

I lol'd.

[Frankensteins Robot]

cool but...

very good graphics
the intro was awesome
very good and structured story but
very simple, you could make a longer story with
this animation
in general very good

adamskii responds:

thanks, i would have love to have made this longer but seeing as it was coursework and the brief called for a 2 minute animation i could be marked down for making it longer you see :<

[Zelda: Links misfortune]

work harder

the story was very slow and the drawing was very square
but even with that the animation was interesting, the sounds that link does were ok, in general i think your work is good but you need to improve it:
1.- in drawing
2.- presentation
keep it up!! XD
8/10

PlatformSource responds:

Im trying to improve my paint brush skills, i used to work with sprites but i got bored of them.im mostly about the zelda and halo now. mario is done with for me, but i will improve :)

[You Don't Love ME Anymore]

Good job

It seems you can do very good movies,
nice song, the only thing is that the animation runs a little slow in terms that
when it beggins there's no much movement just recomend you to make it
a little more fluid.
but very good work
keep it up XD
9/10

OrangePylon responds:

Yeah, I'll give you that on the begining, but I try to keep my submissions T-rated at most, so I couldn't exactly show Birdo "making it with the whole hockey team". ;) I mean my grandma's gonna see this. :P

But thanks alot for the great review.